Definately like this story, and I think the cemetary scene was very well done, especially considering what you're going through in your own life :)
When I think of their next visit, I think of them bringing a picnic blanket or chairs, sitting around in a circle as a family with the gravestone as the fourth side. There's so much to tell her, and the Layton 'family' would be wonderful about telling her all the things she missed. They are a family, and Luke's mother is the missing link in that family, even if she isn't around to experience it first-hand, I can see them keeping her 'in the loop'.
It's a lovely dynamic you've brought to the story and I'm glad you're writing it and sharing with us :)
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Date: 2008-10-19 03:04 pm (UTC)When I think of their next visit, I think of them bringing a picnic blanket or chairs, sitting around in a circle as a family with the gravestone as the fourth side. There's so much to tell her, and the Layton 'family' would be wonderful about telling her all the things she missed. They are a family, and Luke's mother is the missing link in that family, even if she isn't around to experience it first-hand, I can see them keeping her 'in the loop'.
It's a lovely dynamic you've brought to the story and I'm glad you're writing it and sharing with us :)